Hmm...
It was somewhat entertaining, but it could have been better... Maybe you could add a plot or make it longer.
Hmm...
It was somewhat entertaining, but it could have been better... Maybe you could add a plot or make it longer.
That's why it's a short... but thatnks for the review!
Kupo!
Age 29, Male
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Joined on 5/20/08